L’annee dernière ,je suis allé aux Etats-unis avec ma famille.Nous avons logé dans un hôtel de cinq étoiles.J’ai pensé que l’hotel était bon parce que c’était tres grand et très luxurieux.
Pendant les vacances, je suis alle à la
plage. D’abord j’ai joué au foot avec ma famille à la plage et puis j’ai nagé dans la mer.
J’ai adoré les vacances parce que c’était tres interèssant et il a fait beau.
well done
Posted by: hamzah | 01/07/2009 at 08:11 AM
dhaval nice work
Posted by: luqman m | 01/07/2009 at 08:11 AM
I think this is god but he could improve his work with more opinions.
Posted by: Ashana A | 01/07/2009 at 08:13 AM
I think your work is really good, but it would be better if you extended your opinions.
Posted by: Nisha.l | 01/11/2009 at 01:13 PM
good use of paragraphs.
Use more opinions and write in detail.
Posted by: Vishal Patel | 01/11/2009 at 01:15 PM
great
Posted by: akshay | 01/11/2009 at 01:16 PM
very good dhaval, i really like your opinionskeep it up :D:D
Posted by: Jaikishan | 01/12/2009 at 07:22 PM
Wicked
Posted by: Harpreet ,, ;x | 01/12/2009 at 07:23 PM
Amazing but neeeeds more opinions
Posted by: ripal | 01/13/2009 at 04:30 PM
nice work jus needs more opinions
Posted by: ripal | 01/13/2009 at 04:32 PM
Dhavall very very very very gooooood:) ohhh yessssssssss
Posted by: Kierannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn | 01/13/2009 at 06:49 PM
yes yes dhaval doing it badboi
gud wrk lol
hmmm yeshhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by: mohamed | 01/21/2009 at 10:36 AM
Nice Wrk :)
Posted by: Nikita | 01/21/2009 at 08:06 PM