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* Good use of vocabulary
* Nice and colourful
You could have maybe used a picture that was relevant to your explanation. e.g you could have put a picture of a house on top a mountain .
* Good use of vocabulary
* Nice and colourful
You could have maybe used a picture that was relevant to your explanation. e.g you could have put a picture of a house on top a mountain .
Posted by: Bijal T | 03/06/2010 at 12:32 PM
like the colour
love the pictures
could have been more writing
Posted by: Neil Maru | 03/07/2010 at 07:56 PM
A really good picture and also good descriptions about the place.
Posted by: Tehsin Nazir | 03/08/2010 at 09:23 PM
star=nice layout
star= good sentences
wish=make your writing clear
Posted by: Ridwan | 03/10/2010 at 09:07 PM
nice picture
and i like the colours
you could have used sum more writting :P
Posted by: khofi-p | 03/11/2010 at 07:33 AM