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03/01/2010

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Angelee...

-I really liked the picture (thats probably my dream home :)
-I also liked your use of adectives
Even though its brilliant I would have liked it if you put some pictures of the rooms in your dream home

HARSH

star: nice picture
star: good vocabulary
wish: bigger writing next time please

Bijal T

* well described
* thought about what picture matches your description
You could have used another colour other than black

Tehsin N

An excellent picture and it really shows effort. It also includes a good use of french vocabulary.

Ciaran

Good pic
Good vocab
Bigg up the writing nxt tyme

Ravi Seta

This is very good I like the picture and you have used great vocabulary

Harnil Motivras

I really like your use of connectives well done

The lay out is very appealing

Your text could be slightly Bigger But generally good job.

Joshua K

1.Good adjectives and writing style.
2.Picture chosen well.

Wish.The font should probably be changed.Well done

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