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-I really liked the picture (thats probably my dream home :)
-I also liked your use of adectives
Even though its brilliant I would have liked it if you put some pictures of the rooms in your dream home
-I really liked the picture (thats probably my dream home :)
-I also liked your use of adectives
Even though its brilliant I would have liked it if you put some pictures of the rooms in your dream home
Posted by: Angelee... | 03/05/2010 at 04:36 PM
star: nice picture
star: good vocabulary
wish: bigger writing next time please
Posted by: HARSH | 03/05/2010 at 05:02 PM
* well described
* thought about what picture matches your description
You could have used another colour other than black
Posted by: Bijal T | 03/06/2010 at 12:41 PM
An excellent picture and it really shows effort. It also includes a good use of french vocabulary.
Posted by: Tehsin N | 03/08/2010 at 09:28 PM
Good pic
Good vocab
Bigg up the writing nxt tyme
Posted by: Ciaran | 03/09/2010 at 04:16 PM
This is very good I like the picture and you have used great vocabulary
Posted by: Ravi Seta | 03/09/2010 at 04:40 PM
I really like your use of connectives well done
The lay out is very appealing
Your text could be slightly Bigger But generally good job.
Posted by: Harnil Motivras | 03/09/2010 at 07:15 PM
1.Good adjectives and writing style.
2.Picture chosen well.
Wish.The font should probably be changed.Well done
Posted by: Joshua K | 03/09/2010 at 09:12 PM