Je m'appelle Jemini Barchha et j'ai onze ans. J'habite à Leicester. Mon anniversaire c'est le sept Mars.
J'ai un frère mais je n'ai pas de soeurs. Il s’appelle Pritesh et il a 22 ans.Son anniversaire est le seize juin.J'adore mon frère parce qu' il est sympa et amusant.
J'ai un chat. Elle s'appelle ‘Fluffy’ et elle a cinq ans. Son anniversaire est le neuf octobre. Je voudrais un chien parce qu’ils sont mignons et beaux.
very good but could add some more and good vocab
Posted by: taran d | 01/17/2009 at 05:50 PM
1)I liked the pet bit
2)I liked the font.
But it was too short...
Posted by: Palka.C | 01/17/2009 at 07:46 PM
Star! : Well i think Jemini, it was nice and very interesting!
Star2!! : I like the information you provided and its nice and short and simple not too over going!
But you could improve the vocab a little and i think there should be a bit more describing in your speech!
but Its wicked.
Posted by: Ashini.S | 01/18/2009 at 08:58 PM
Star:good choice of coluor
Star:liked the pet bit
Wish:mayb too short
Posted by: Ciaran.k | 01/20/2009 at 04:06 PM
* nice advectives about your brother.
* good vocabulary with good words.
WISH: it would be better if you discribed Fluffy
more!
P.S. I know you really would like to have a pet called Fluffy.
Posted by: Sneha G | 01/22/2009 at 09:06 PM