Je pense à toi, jour et soir
Tu es beau comme une rose rouge
Tu pues comme le lavande
Tu es la pomme à mes yeux
Je t'aime plus que ma mère
Parce que tu es gentil comme Dieu
Tu es fort comme un arbre
Tu es amusant comme un clown
Bonne Saint Valentin
Je t'aime...
nice poem
good use of vocabulary
Posted by: uresha | 02/27/2009 at 06:33 PM
STAR-- you did very well
STAR-- you expanded your vocab
STAR-- you should do the bad part as well
Posted by: Hiral | 02/28/2009 at 03:37 PM
WOW KARISHMA HOW GREAT CAN YOUR WORK GET! KEEP IT UP. I LIKE the idea that you are using but mine is better. I want to face you in a one on one slam match in french to prove to the whole class that i am better than even you. You could have used funnier and interesting adjectives.
Posted by: Vishal Patel | 02/28/2009 at 04:49 PM
star = it is a really nice poem
star = you have used really good vocabulary
wish = you could have made it funnier
Posted by: Amanpreet Kaur | 02/28/2009 at 07:18 PM
star=very well written poem
star=i like your description
wish=you should do the good and bad poemm
very well done :)
Posted by: Riya | 03/01/2009 at 03:15 PM
Ty Guyz (L)
Lol .. I'm a sweet person (A) I can't do bad things =P
Posted by: Karishma C | 03/02/2009 at 08:00 PM