Reiss

Tu es belle comme un gâteau

Tu es amusante comme un comique

Tu es intelligent comme un docteur

Tu es gentille comme une mère

Tu es forte comme une barbeque

Tu es sympathique comme une massage

Cependant...

Tu es grosse comme un ouvrier

Tu es pénible comme les devoirs

Tu es horrible comme la boue

Tu es paresseuse comme Homer Simpson

Tu pues comme le fromage 

Comments

[siddhant]

hello reisse
for homework i had to write to stars and a wish so here i go !
stars= you used funny vocab and included names (homer simpson) which made me laugh and makes your poem amusing.

i couldnt think of a wish due to the fact that your poem is great so all i can say i WELL DONE !

[Ravi Tank]

hi reiss
Here's your 2 stars and a wish
2 stars
Great to read ,it's really funny and good vocab
A wish
nothing bad to say, thats how great it is

[keval]

good words
good use of the simpsons

[YASEEN]

star>>> your poem makes me laugh:)

star>>> your poem is good:)

wish>>> you could have made the poem more funny pum

YASEEN

[neel]

hii its neel

star - funny
star - good use of vocab
wish - could have made it a bit more interesting.

[Dylan]

wow reiss nice vocabulary and sense of humour but longer sentances would be a boost.