Tu es beau comme un prince
Tu es amusant comme un comique
Tu es gentil comme un ange
Tu es intelligent comme un dictionnaire
Tu es fort comme un coquillage
Tu es sympa comme un pétale
Bon saint valentin
Je pense toujours à toi
Tu es le monde pour moi
Je t’aime bien
Pense a moi et m’acheté du chocolat
You have,great use of words.
Posted by: uresha | 02/27/2009 at 06:28 PM
star = i liked the ending of your poem
star = you used nice words like prince and comic the are all romantic
wish = don't change anything it's good!
Posted by: Nisha.l | 02/27/2009 at 08:06 PM
good work good use of vocabulary. Try to make your vocabulary sound funnier
Posted by: Vishal Patel | 02/28/2009 at 04:48 PM