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03/01/2010

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manisha binning

good job dhara

HARSH

star: nice pictures
star: good background
wish: chek your punctuations

khushali

star:good pictures
star:good backround colour
wish:little paraghaphs

Manisha Binning

Star: cool pictures.
Star: Very good ajectives.
Wish: you could of maybe used a different colour for the backround to make it blend with the pictures.

Shona =) x

Nice colours and adjectves...
Use more connectives to make it more interesting. x

Ciaran.K

Good one, make the pic suiite the WRiiTING

Mica

* fantastic pictures
* nice adjectives
could have more pictures

kishan a

star : nice use of background colour
star : good picture
Wish : bigger text

sonali

nice pictures

ridwan

star=nice writing
star=good layout
wish more writing

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Year 7 French trip Boulogne

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