Moi- Ajaaz RW

Je m’appelle Ajaaz. J’ai douze ans. J’habite aٓٓٓ  Leicester. J’ai un frère et deux sœurs. Il s’appelle Shahbaz. Elles s’appellent Tasneem et Tahreem. Il a quinze ans. Elles ont sept et neuf ans. Je n’aime pas mon frère parce qu’il est pénible. Je n’aime pas mes sœurs parce qu’elles sont méchantes. Mon anniversaire est le neuf janvier. Je n’aipas d’animal. Je voudrais un cheval, deux oiseaux, trois poissons et un chat.

Comments

[MUNIS U]

1) used corect punctation
2) used correct spelling

wish: should have writing in paragrah

[ketan c]

it was good french and very descriptive. readable

[nishil p]

Good vocab.
Correct spellings.
Should be put into paragraphs.

[meenar.s]

Star:Good vocab :)
Star:Good spelling :)
Wish:Should have wrote in paragraphs :(

[Ciaran.k]

Star:used good vocab.
Star:used good punctuation.
Wish:should have written in paragraphs.

[Josh k]

1.Great punctuation.
2.Descriptive.
1 wish.It could have been put into paragraphs.

[Bhavik.C]

Star:Nice use of words!
Star:Correct spellings!
Wish:Could have done it in paragraphs!