Je m'appelle Meenar.J'ai douze ans.Mon anniversaire, c'est le douze septembre.J'habite Leicester.J'ai un frère mais je n'ai pas de sœur.Il s'appelle Krish.Il a six ans.J'aime mon frère parce qu’ il est normalement sympa.J'ai un poisson et il a trois mois. Il s’appelle Spotty.Je voudrais un chien parce qu’ ils sont amusants.
bravo, excellent liked your work especially your eighth sentence andf what you had written at the start but maybe space it out to paragraphs.
Posted by: rohit p | 01/16/2009 at 09:43 PM
star=liked your 8th sentence
star=good start at the start
wish=could of used paragraphs
Posted by: Ajaaz A | 01/17/2009 at 01:57 PM
It was colourful.
It was interesting to read.
Could have used paragraphs and written more about his pet, Spotty.
Posted by: nishil p | 01/21/2009 at 05:14 PM