Je m’appelle Neelam. J’ai douze ans. J’habite à Leicester. Mon anniversaire, c’est le dix décembre.
J’ai un frère mais je n’ai pas de sœurs. Il s’appelle Dylan. Il a sept ans. j’aime mon frère parce qu’ il est très stupide. Mon frère cadet est pénible et amusant.
J’ai un poisson. Il s’appelle Nemo. Mon poisson est orange et orange et il a deux ans. Il est stupide. Je voudrais un chien parce qu’ ils sont mignons.
well done especially the work written. I liked your second paragraph but maybe change the text backqround colour.
Posted by: rohit p | 01/16/2009 at 09:40 PM
i like her font
she has wrote alot on her brother and pet:)
she should have not used the word 'et' so much
Posted by: angelee k | 01/17/2009 at 01:14 PM
star=good vocabulary
star=good punctuation
wish=you shouldn't of highlighted it
Posted by: Ajaaz A | 01/17/2009 at 02:12 PM
i like the combinations of the colours! (i think black as a background looks nice)
you have written in paragraphs
i think that you should of written more
Posted by: Amna k | 01/17/2009 at 05:22 PM
1. Good use of words
2. I like your last paragraph and...
you should have made it longer
Posted by: Uma A | 01/18/2009 at 12:40 PM
star- i really liked your writing was very colourful
star- you answered all the questions so thet was good
wish- you could have done your writing longer
Posted by: Haneefah A | 01/19/2009 at 04:26 PM
STAR(*)= good vocab
STAR(*)= good punctuation
WISH= shouldn't of highlighted it
Posted by: Neel R | 01/19/2009 at 08:59 PM