Moi- Megan RW

Je m’appelle Megan Lay.J’ai onze ans.J’habite à Leicester.J’ai une soeur.Elle a cinq ans.Elle s’appelle Ami.J’aime ma soeur parce que elle est sage et sympa.Mon anniversaire, c’est le trois juillet. J’ai un chat.Elle est pénible et quelquefois elle est stupide.Je voudrais un serpent, deux tortues et un dragon.

Comments

[bejal p]

i think it was quite good because she used some adjectives and some punctuation but she can improve it by linking the sentences together using mais, parce que etc because her sentences are a little short.

[Vanisha B]

i like that you have used a big font.
i like what you have said.
you could have used more details.

[Palka.C]

1)I like the font
2)I liked what you wrote about.

But it was too short for me...