Moi- Sneha RW

Je m’appelle Sneha et j’ai onze ans. J’habite à Leicester. Mon anniversaire, c’est le vingt-neuf mai.

J’ai un frère qui s’appelle Bharat et il a quatre ans. J’ai aussi une sœur qui s’appelle Bella et elle a seize ans.

J’aime beaucoup ma sœur aînée et j’aime bien mon frère cadet parce que je pense que ils sont très sympa mais quelquefois ils sont assez méchants.

J’ai un poisson rouge. Il s’appelle Erick et il a cinq ans. Il est rouge et il est très pénible.Je voudrais un cheval parce que a mon avis ils sont mignons et beaux.

Comments

[R Wilson]

Well done Sneha. This is a lovely piece of work.

[Bella]

Good work for yr 7, wait till you get to yr 9, where they make you use "the-15-words-in-a-sentence" rule. i'm only posting you a comment because i felt sorry for you as you only have few comment, and that you wrote that i am nice (is that for real?)
Bella
p.s by the way ill ask mum if you can have a fish called Erick for your b-day.

[Pooja]

Well done Sneha, what i don't know in french you can write almost fluently. I hope you can eventually beat me on my grand total of languages (which is 5). And also i should thank your teacher as well for teaching you well.

[Jemini.B]

I really like all the adjectives you used!
It had fluent Language!

[Jemini.B]

I really like all the adjectives you used!
It had fluent Language!