Tu es belle comme une fraise
Tu es amusante comme une foire
Tu es gentille comme une domestique
Tu es intelligente comme un joueur d’échecs
Tu es sympa comme un coccinelle
Tu es laide comme un poulet mort
Tu es pénible comme un voyou
Tu es horrible comme un âne
Tu pues comme la diarrhée
hello keval how are you ??
stars= your poem is great its funny and to the point lol !
also you used great words i had to use a dictionary to see what they are!
wish !!!
your poem is great but its confusing as you didnt use a space between the two or a "mais"
but otherwise its great!
see you at school siddhant
Posted by: siddhant | 02/28/2009 at 12:40 PM
hi keval
2 stars
Great poem, it's really funny and good use of vocab
wish
should of split it into 2 parts
Posted by: Ravi Tank | 03/01/2009 at 02:19 PM
that kind as a servant me me laugh!
Amazing
not much to improve on. WELL DONE!
Posted by: ripal | 03/01/2009 at 07:00 PM
Ok...
First of all
Stars -> Funny
Stars -> I Like it =p .... Nice words hat we aint used
Wish -> You should of done a good poem not bad.
Posted by: Monish | 03/01/2009 at 09:59 PM
star>>> your poem makes me laugh:)
star>>> your poem is good:)
wish>>> you could have made the poem a nice 1
YASEEN
Posted by: YASEEN | 03/04/2009 at 08:22 PM
hiii its neel
star - fun to read
star - good quality of words
wish - could have done both versions (love and hate)
Posted by: neel | 03/05/2009 at 07:48 PM
star>>> lol i agree with yaseen it is funny.
star>>> good use of words.
wish>>>erm....... none =P
Posted by: Dylan | 03/05/2009 at 09:44 PM