Tu es belle comme une crabe
Tu es amusant comme un professeur
Tu es gentille comme un cochon
Tu es intelligente comme une limace
Tu es forte comme une fourmi
Tu es sympa comme une criminelle
Mais
Tu es grosse une baleine
Tu es laide comme une zombie
Tu es pénible comme une épingle
Tu es horrible comme une sorcière
Tu es paresseuse comme un escargot
Tu pues comme l’ail
hello mayur !
stars= great work i like the great use of words
also your work is seriously funny so good job!!!
wish= mayur because of the great work i found it hard to choose a wish but i think you could have written a nice poem to rather then two mean ones.
good job though see ya l8r !
BYE (siddhant)
Posted by: siddhant | 02/28/2009 at 12:30 PM
Hi mayur
2 stars
great vocab and really funny poem
wish
you should of written 1 nice poem
Posted by: Ravi Tank | 03/01/2009 at 02:14 PM
very good
uve used words we aint even laernt
Posted by: keval | 03/03/2009 at 07:58 PM
hii its neel
star - good use of vocab
star - interesting / funny to read
wish - done to love ones instaed of one mean and one good.
Posted by: neel | 03/05/2009 at 07:39 PM
Mayur that wasn't bad at all it was funny and good use of words but but..... nahh nothin bad bout it.
nice 1;)
Posted by: Dylan | 03/05/2009 at 09:51 PM