Tu es belle comme un beignet. J
Tu es amusante comme un comique. J
Tu es gentille comme un bébé. J
Tu es intelligente comme une carte de noël. J
Tu es forte comme moi. J
Tu es sympa comme la Paris. J
MAIS !!!!!!!!
Tu es grosse comme un éléphant. L
Tu es laide comme une grenouille. L
Tu es pénible comme une bande de jeunes. L
Tu es horrible comme une rédaction. L
Tu es paresseuse comme un coquillage. L
Tu pues comme un cochon. L
Hi.
Stars -> Great
Stars -> I like the colours and the words you used.
Wish -> I dunno =s
Posted by: Monish | 03/01/2009 at 10:10 PM
good vocab et colour
Posted by: keval | 03/03/2009 at 08:08 PM
its good and you've used good vocab and theres nothing bad about it!
Posted by: Dipika | 03/04/2009 at 04:51 PM
star>>> your poem makes me laugh:)
star>>> your poem is great:)
wish>>> you could have made the poem more funny
YASEEN
Posted by: YASEEN | 03/04/2009 at 08:27 PM
hi its neel
star - you have done both verses
star - fun to read
wish - could have added a bit more.
Posted by: neel | 03/05/2009 at 07:36 PM
good vocab and colour and no bad points and im sure people will love this poem if the received it.;)
Posted by: Dylan | 03/05/2009 at 09:57 PM