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star: nice pictures star: nicely presented wish: make sure the writings don't go over the other writing
Posted by: HARSH | 03/05/2010 at 05:09 PM
Nice Presentation Skills, Could have used adjecties intead of a list =)
Posted by: Shona =) xx | 03/07/2010 at 04:12 PM
star ; good use of colours star ; good choise of textsize wish ; could improve on the information given
Posted by: Rohit P | 03/08/2010 at 04:45 PM
Star- Love Your Picture Star- Like the Layout Wish- should add more information
Posted by: Amna | 03/09/2010 at 07:40 PM
You Could Improve By Not Overlapping Writing And Use More Describing Words
Posted by: Neelam x | 03/09/2010 at 08:14 PM
1.Well presented advertising. 2.Good colour combination.
Wish.The layout needs improving. Well done
Posted by: Joshua K | 03/09/2010 at 09:05 PM
*nice background *nice writing wish=bit more writing
Posted by: ridwan | 03/10/2010 at 09:55 PM
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star: nice pictures
star: nicely presented
wish: make sure the writings don't go over the other writing
Posted by: HARSH | 03/05/2010 at 05:09 PM
Nice Presentation Skills,
Could have used adjecties intead of a list =)
Posted by: Shona =) xx | 03/07/2010 at 04:12 PM
star ; good use of colours
star ; good choise of textsize
wish ; could improve on the information given
Posted by: Rohit P | 03/08/2010 at 04:45 PM
Star- Love Your Picture
Star- Like the Layout
Wish- should add more information
Posted by: Amna | 03/09/2010 at 07:40 PM
You Could Improve By Not Overlapping Writing And Use More Describing Words
Posted by: Neelam x | 03/09/2010 at 08:14 PM
1.Well presented advertising.
2.Good colour combination.
Wish.The layout needs improving. Well done
Posted by: Joshua K | 03/09/2010 at 09:05 PM
*nice background
*nice writing
wish=bit more writing
Posted by: ridwan | 03/10/2010 at 09:55 PM